Al-Sirat

Looking good. I´d love another one with the inner clouds really trailing away further and longer (if you know what I mean)

Yeah, that´s what´s wrong. I need to pull everything further down the tunnel while not getting any closer to the light.
This one´s eating at me so I´ll get it there...eventually.

Its a good start... I love it. Maybe give it more of a softer feeling too, like kinda blend in the different colors a little together on the edges where the contrast is the most by the center. That should give it a more "airy" "cloudy" feel instead of the "liquidy" feeling it gives. But its just my opinion I still love it and its my favorite so far on this whole web